Her: Part 1
Her
Part 1
Prologue
Dear Reader,
I hope you’re sitting comfortably, as I’m about to tell you a story; but this is no ordinary fairy tale-it is a story of love and betrayal, murder and mystery, treason and treachery…Be warned my friend, as when you read this book, your spine will chill, your blood will boil, your mind will flip! Be warned my friend, be warned…
Chapter 1
Holding hands, Jack and Gill ran into the courtyard.
â Oh Jack, I’m so glad that we’re finally married!â exclaimed Gill. They fell down, laughing, surrounded by fresh, green grass. Surprised, Gill turned around to look at Jack; she noticed something in his pocket. It was the map.
“Jack, is that the map that you found in Dad’s house?” questioned Gill. She was right : Jack tucked it away, further into his pocket, out of sight. ”It is the map!” she said, as she answered her own question. Before Jack could realise, Gill snatched the map out of his pocket, and ran. She ran far, far away.
Chapter 2
Jack stared upwards. The scene was different. The smell was different. The sight was different. The sight? The thought struck him: where am I? It turned out that Jack had woke up from an everlasting dream and was now staring at his wife.
âWho, who are you,â he stuttered.
âWhy Jack, I am your wife! Don’t you remember me?â
â N-n-no. Where’s Gill?â
âWhy Jack , I am Gill. The one your used to is an imposter!â Thoughts raced through his mind, Uncle Goodmanâs, the forest, the castle; there was always the feeling that someone was watching him, always the feeling that something was wrong. She was always there watching him. At first he thought it was a sign of love and truth; but no, it was a sign a sign of hatred and vengeance. Things stirred in his mind. He was taken back to Uncle Goodmanâs, but not is all as it seemsâŠ
Chapter 3
It was all the same : the luxury sofas, the stainless steel toast racks, the ladies in peacock-like dresses. All the same. Except one thing, Gill. She was acting strange, she looked uncomfortable and was shuffling in her seat. She was trying to hide something: it was a long stick. A thin, black, long stick.
âYou okay sonny,â one of the guests had nudged him,âyou look a biâ pale.â
âNo-no-Iâm fine.âJack replied.
âOkay then,â he turned to leave, then quickly turned back round. âYou wanâ a drink?â
âNo-no, really, Iâm fine.â Jack said, again. He huffed and left as if he was no use to anybody. Jack turned back to Gill. She had taken out her stick. It was glowing. He could hear a faint whispering as if someone was calling him: âJack? Ja-ack? Can you hear me?â All of a sudden his mind clicked back to the present.
Chapter 4
Gillian (his wife) was staring down at him. Kneeling over him as if she had been praying for his life.
âOh Jack, thank goodness youâre Okay, you went unconscious again it scared me to death!â She cried.
âI-Iâm fine,â he rubbed his head.âI thinkâ.
âWhy donât you lie down while I get you a nice hot drinkâ she offered. Jack nodded his head in reply, too tired to do anything else. Slowly and carefully, he lay back his head, and closed his eyes. Again, things began to stir in his mind. He was taken back to the briars and brambles of the forest of thornsâŠ
Chapter 5
Everything was the same, the thorny brambles, the strange blossoms, the white twigs. Though something was different, something he hadnât seen before. Tracks had been planted on the ground. He walked on. The blossoms became fragments of clothing, the twigs became bones. Thoughts raced through his mind about all of these things, when he spotted something. Gill was on the path, chanting words while waving her stick. Skulls and clothing were appearing out of nowhere. She seemed to be giggling. She said,
âJack will never know that Iâm not his wife, but if he does heâll have to get past this then heâll be too scared to find his real wife and heâll be running back to meâ He stepped on a branch. It snapped. Gill turned round and screamed,
âYou-you know my plan! You may not live on!â A light shone out of her stick and hit him in the chestâŠ
Emke, this is amazing! Please publish the next part of the story soon. I need to know whatâs happening next. It is so suspenseful!!!